Sometimes a blogfest comes around that is just too good to pass up. DL's W(h)IP It Good is one of those. Check this link out Cruising Altitude 2.0
"Our idea is that on Friday, May 31st, we will provide
a forum to allow anyone interested a chance to tell the blogosphere about their
most recent [W]ork [I]n [P]rogress. We’ll guide you by providing a few prompts
to answer in your own post, and even give you the opportunity to solicit CP’s
(partners who exchange material for detail critique – usually chapter by
chapter) or Beta Readers (test readers who read entire manuscripts and offer
broad opinions) if you’re looking for that."
Here's my answers to the prompts. What about you? What is your WIP about?Here are the prompts we would like you to follow:
WIP Title: FRIENDLY FIRE
Word Count (projected/actual so far): 100k/106k (I need room to edit ; )
Genre: Women’s Fiction
How long have you been working on it?: Since March 2008
Elevator Pitch (if you came across an agent in an elevator ride, what couple of lines would you use to summarize your book):
Our deepest wounds come from those who should be our
strongest support. The families of Cherry Hill, GA know this truth all too
well.
Brief Synopsis (250 words or less):
Laura Grace Chandler
knows the look of a child who needs a mother. All it takes is one look at
Samantha Smith, an abused foster child, to make Laura Grace want to dive into
the breach. Brief Synopsis (250 words or less):
The only problem is, Laura Grace isn’t a mother, never has
been. But she is a retired teacher who is recently widowed and needs to find a
reason to keep going.
But Samantha Smith isn’t the only person in need of Laura
Grace’s help to heal. Abuse is all around her and even right under her nose.Are you looking for a Critique Partner?: Not at this time. My online community at Book and Writers Forum is filling this job.
Are you looking for a Beta Reader?: I already have several lined up for when I get a draft ready.
Great blog hop idea! Can't wait to read this once you're finished--I always enjoy your snips! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Lara!
DeleteThis sounds like an interesting story. Good luck with it!
ReplyDeleteKate, I feel I've been blessed with this story and it hope it works like I think it will.
DeleteYay! It's always fun to celebrate the WIP.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sara. You're one of my Beta readers and I've trying to get it ready, I really am. ; )
DeleteBest of luck with your WIP - the edits can be groan-worthy. I'm at the first re-write stage with mine and sometimes I just can't go there!
ReplyDeleteShah X
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I know what you mean, Shah! Editing is the pits some days.
DeleteI'm echoing Lara on this one.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jo!
DeleteThis story sounds great!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Elizabeth!
DeleteThis sounds like a story with substance! You've definitely been at it for a while.Thank you for taking part today, and good luck with your WIP! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, DL and thank you for a great blogfest!
DeleteHa! beta wannabe waves hello!
ReplyDeleteThis is a fun blogfest!
You're on the list, Deniz! I'm counting on you to catch the little nits. ; )
DeleteSounds like a great idea! Good luck finishing it!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Adriana!
DeleteAw--I love stories with lots of heart. Great blurb.
ReplyDeleteMy MC's heart is on her sleeve...and all the way down. ; ) Thanks for the blurb comment.
DeleteGreat concept - Sounds very deep and meaningful.
ReplyDeleteIt's close to my heart, Tiana. I'm a retired teacher and I do know the pain of abuse in children.
DeleteZan Marie, your story sounds intriguing. Looks like several people will come out of this story as better characters.
ReplyDeleteI do hope so, J.L. It's a story that keeps deepening as I go.
DeleteReally sounds like a compelling story and something I would really like to read some day.
ReplyDeleteI'll add you to my reader list, Sydney. ; )
DeleteI have to finish it first. ; )
Sounds really good, I would read it :)
ReplyDeleteSuzanne @ Suzannes Tribe
Thanks, Suzanne!
DeleteOutside of my normal realm, but it sounds great.
ReplyDeleteTim
The Other Side blog.
Thanks, Timothy ; )
Delete"Room to edit" -- I like that. Usually, I cut more than I add during revisions, but with my most recent project, my editor wanted me to ADD over 4K in new scenes. They turned out great, so I'm glad I did. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteThank, Milo! I know I have a lot of little, useless words that will have to get the axe in the end. Good luck with fleshing your story out. ; )
DeleteHi Zan Marie!
ReplyDeleteWow, this story of yours sounds powerful with tragedy but hopefully a lot of healing. I also like your pitch, I think it's something many of us can relate. Good luck with this! (:
Thanks, Elise! And thank you for hosting the blog hop. It's a good one.
DeleteThis story sounds quite wrenching but also with potential for an uplifting resolution. I love seeing characters able to do some good and make a real difference.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Trisha! I think it will uplift at the end, but the journey is tough. ; )
ReplyDeleteFascinating premise. I'm with Trisha in that it does sound dark, wrenching.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Hunter. Its opening scene came to me in a dream and it keep getting better. ; )
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