Tuesday, November 11, 2014

November Tip Week: Moving or Manipulating?

In a guest post at Amy Sue Nathan's Women's Fiction Writers, Traci Borum asks a great question: Do Books Move or Manipulate You?


Poor kitty! There's only one way to go. (Source)


I've been thinking about this since I first read it. It's easy to manipulate readers by setting up the emotions we want them to feel. But is it a good idea? I say NO! (How loudly do you want me to yell? ;-) Readers aren't idiots. They can tell when writers take short cuts to emotions and telegraph what they should feel. It makes your stories forgettable and feeble, in my opinion. I don't like being manipulated by writers and usual quit reading because of the manipulation. 

My stories center around deep social and family issues. I could easily fall into the manipulating side of writing, but I truly think the characters of my stories can carry the problems they face and share their trials and triumphs without it. 

Traci Borum suggests several ways to avoid manipulation :
  • Write the story with truth.
  • Stay honest in the moment by being in the moment yourself. 
  • Don't worry about the reader's reaction.
  • Be invested in the characters. Care about them and the readers will too.
  •  Listen to your gut. If it feels like you're trying too hard, dial it back.
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What about you? 
Have you read books that manipulated you? 
How did it make you feel? 
Do you have any more suggestions for writers?


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Next week: Author Interview! What? You were expecting the mini book review? Well, Thanksgiving made me do it. Really! ;-)