Showing posts with label Compuserve Books and Writers Forum. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Compuserve Books and Writers Forum. Show all posts

Tuesday, November 26, 2013

Giving Thanks!

 

It's Thanksgiving week in the US and we're cleaning, shopping, baking, and cooking up a big feast. I wouldn't mind having those turkey cookies! ;-)

And I thought it was a perfect time to take stock and list a few things I'm grateful for.
  • I'm thankful for the CompuServe Books and Writers Forum and most especially for the Writers Exercises folder. I've learned all I know about craft there. Thanks, y'all. You're the best. You've helped me from my first struggling scenes to a nearly finished rough draft.
  • I'm thankful for the Women's Fiction Writers Association and all the support, resources, and friendship that finding a genre home provides.
  • I'm thankful for a few very discerning Beta Readers who helped me see that FRIENDLY FIRE Part 1 was sorely lacking in tension. Thanks John, Sara, Susan, and Deniz!
  • I'm thankful that ways to provide said tension have come to me relatively quickly. This month has seen a great new aspect being added to the manuscript.
I wish for all of you a wonderful end to November and a delicious meal on turkey day!

Tuesday, June 11, 2013

House Party--A Night at the Museum

It's House Party time! Not at my house. It's not ready for such...yet. ; ) No, this is an ad lib writing exercise at the Books and Writers Forum. We haven't had one in a while and we're excited.

From time to time, one of the Forum members hosts a "house party" for our characters at a setting of their choice. My characters have gone to a psychologist's office for therapy, visited London during the Blitz, attended a fair hosted by King Charles II, gone skiing in New Zealand, visited Istanbul in the 15th century, gone to the Mall at the End of Time, and hosted a Fourth of July party in Cherry Hill.

I've blogged about this intensive writing exercise several times. Here's two links to the Cherry Hill House Party blogs.

HERE

HERE

This time, I have a new character, one who I know only a little about, at the party--Tom Chandler. It's only recently that Tom has come forward as more than Laura Grace's dead husband. His goodness has been revealed through her memories and grief. Back in December, Tom Chandler rose from my subconscious to demand equal time. Here's a blog post introducing his story in CAMP FIRE.
When we began to talk about a house party, I thought I'd take Tom as a 19 year old. He's still feeling his way to being his own man. Why wouldn't a Night in a Museum with wacky exhibits be a good idea to help me learn more about him? ; )

Here's just a bit I wrote to introduce him to the other writers.

Thomas Cherry Chandler (Tom), 19, is six feet four inches, with a long and lean build rather like Michelangelo’s DAVID. His golden hair is wavy, just short of curls, and sits on his collar and covers his neatly attached ears and flops over his high forehead. His complexion is fair with a tendency toward red, especially when he’s been out in the sun. His long face’s best feature is deep-set, dark blue eyes that are rimmed with navy and turn to slate when he’s angry. Tom usually wears bell-bottomed jeans with well-worn hems and a tee shirt.

He’s a direct descendant of the founder of Cherry Hill—Lawton Cherry. Unfortunately for Tom, his mother still thinks that being a “Cherry” matters more than the content of your character. And he doesn’t measure up. He cares too deeply for the poor and wants to be a teacher.

Tom’s reaction is to draw in, but seek areas where he can be his own man like making reproductions of the antiques in the house that people pay good money for—money he will use to get an education degree at the local college and not go to UGA and major in business like Mother insists. He’s more than just a “Cherry”. And he loves to slip out of the Cherry House where he lives to the woods to camp and be alone with his thoughts—thoughts that might be better left unsaid. Some he’s voiced only to be slapped down by Mother. Others he knows better than to say. But his stomach was aching from all the swallowed thoughts.
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“Thomas Cherry! If you persist on this path, you’ll never measure up.”

Her voice followed him upstairs and down. After every discussion of his plans to be a teacher. Measure up. It pulsed through him every day and in everything he did.

How did you measure up to a ghost? The ghost who reigned in every timber of the house and created the town that bore his name? A ghost who had stared at him from the huge portrait over the parlor mantel every day of his life.

The cold blue gaze held him captive every time until he had to blink. But the small gilt mirror under the portrait dared you to compare yourself to “The Law.” Did measuring up have anything to do with the having the same high forehead, eyes, and square jaw? Or the same height?

No. It couldn’t be or Mother wouldn’t continue harping on being a Cherry and acting like one.

What about being a Chandler? Apparently Daddy’s family didn’t matter. Nor did Daddy if the arguments he overheard nearly every day were any indication.

Forcing his eyes off his own face, he stared at the “Great Gray Eminence” of Cherry Hill again. “What do you want of me, Old Man?”

Be your own man.

He froze. His breath whistled through his nose as his heart kicked up.

He could do that. And it didn’t take creating a town to do it. No. His goal was to be worthy of Laurie. Pure and simple. That would be enough.
 
If you want to know more about Tom, check out the Night at the Museum House Party. Bear in mind that we just started yesterday. The story is just taking shape. You're in a  wild and fast-paced read. You'll be amazed at the creativity and talent of the participating writers. ; )

Sunday, June 12, 2011

The Writer's Bestiary--A Poem

~~I write poetry from time to time and thought I'd share my latest one. It came from a discussion on the Books and Writers Forum about writing woes and what our tears do. I have to thank Ron Wodaski and Deniz Bevan for some of the images. Ron's blog is HERE and Deniz's is HERE.

The Writer’s Bestiary

I crouch in a desolate, desert waste
Of dry words without life or form or taste.
Then my muse appears to sit at my feet,
Her hand cupping, catching my tears;
Her smile wild and sweet.

“Dear One,
Each drop you weep holds
    oceans of healing, and
    balm for those you seek.
In my hand I hold the cure
    for word count dragonflies,
    each wing made complete.
They water the hummingbirds who fly,
    knitting your scenes together
    unfolding your plot to the sky.
When your characters refuse their names,
    your tears ease the roly-polies’ fears,
    and soften the beetle’s hard shell,
    where their hearts hide so well.
And as your tears overflow on
    caterpillar, cocoon, and butterfly,
    setting becomes focused and clear.
Choked throats, full of dialog are freed
    as your tears tend the songbird’s wing,
    allowing it once again to fly and sing.

“So cry, Dear One.
Your tears are not shed in vain.
Use them to write your story once again.”

Monday, August 9, 2010

House Party Alchemy

~~Cherry Hill is magic! When I volunteered to host a Forum house party, I saw it as a chance to try out my novel's setting on a group of talented writers. If Susan, Claire, Deniz, Adderbury, Marilyn, Spesh, Becky, Ron, Jill, and Tara could interact with my small Georgia town well enough to create a story, I would be happy.
~~Well, I'm ecstatic! We had a stellar house party. Among us, we wrote 180,976 words from Thursday night, July 29, to Saturday night, August 7. I had prepared about 10,000 words before hand. I didn't use all of them, and some had to be reshaped to fit the story as we went. As the other writers interacted with their characters, I found myself describing more and more about Laura Grace Chandler's home town, Cherry Hill, Georgia.
~~My characters--Laura Grace, Samantha, Rosemary, and Dean--had to respond to the story as well. I wrote a total of 13,646 words across the nine days of the house party. My total original words of all types connected with the house party is 18,410. That's amazing! Much of this material will be useful with some reshaping in my novel, Mother's Day. More importantly, my understanding of the relationship between Laura Grace and Rosemary has become clear. This is one to the emotional cores of my story. I hadn't seen a way to tell this part of the story until my fellow writers reacted to my town. Now I can write Mother's Day as it should written.
~~To my Forum family, thank you, one and all, dear friends for this gift. It's beyond anything I could have imagined.

Monday, August 2, 2010

House Party? Am I invited?

~~The short answer is yes! You're invited to travel to Cherry Hill, GA, the setting of my novel in progress.
~~The long answer takes some explaining. ; ) I'm a member of the CompuServe Books and Writers Forum and an active participant in the Writers Exercises folder. My fellow members and I do writing craft exercises every month and every few months, we hold an online house party in the setting of one of our works in progress. This time, my Laura Grace Chandler is hosting over forty characters that range from contemporary to historical and fantasy to scifi. Twelve different writers are adding to the running story that started late Thursday night and will continue into the coming weekend. They are from all over the US, Canada, Australia and New Zealand. We trust each other with our characters and, as the story evolves, we can find our creations doing all sorts of strange and wonderful things. The greatest thing about a house party is that, as you write by the seat of your pants, you have to respond to suggestions and situations you could not have thought of by yourself. Characters have a way of deepening and stretching in reaction to the scenes and the writer's grasp on the person that inhabits their stories deepens with it.
~~If you would like to sample the story go to:
http://community.compuserve.com/n/pfx/forum.aspx?tsn=1&nav=messages&webtag=ws-books&tid=68081
You do not have to be a member of the forum to read the story. But a word of warning: It is wickedly fast, well over 200 posts long, and no where near to completion. You just might find yourself hooked. ; )
If you want to get a glimpse of how we communicate with each other outside of the story, try the commentary thread here:
http://community.compuserve.com/n/pfx/forum.aspx?tsn=1&nav=messages&webtag=ws-books&tid=68082
~~Happy reading! ; )

Monday, October 12, 2009

You HAVE to Read This Book!


~~I mean it. With over three and a half million words in print and seventeen million copies sold (and growing), you can't go wrong if Diana Gabaldon's name is on the cover. Diana's latest book, An Echo in the Bone, debuted at number two on the New York Times bestseller list. Echo went on sale September 22 and it has been selling fast ever since. And there's good reason for the number of books sold. Full of historical fiction and military history, time-travel, wonderful, realistic characters, intricate plots, accurate research used in creative ways, and layered, beautiful detail that draws the reader in, Diana Gabaldon shows what great writing can be. As the winner of the Quill and Corinne International prizes for her last book, A Breath of Snow and Ashes, many know how good a read her books are.

~~The main Outlander series introduces readers to the amazing lives of Jamie Frazer, a Scottish Highlander, and his wife, Claire Randall, a nurse from WWII. Yes, it's possible. ; ) The order of the main series is:

*Outlander

*Dragonfly in Amber

*Voyager

*Drums of Autumn

*The Fiery Cross

*A Breath of Snow and Ashes

* An Echo in the Bone

In addition, Diana has written an offshoot series about the interesting character, Lord John Grey. Lord John is an important character in the main series and to understand his importance, the reader should read his series as well. The Lord John books are:

*Lord John and the Hand of Devils

*Lord John and the Private Matter

* Lord John and the Brotherhood of the Blade

The first is an anthology of three novellas. The correct chronological order of the stories are "The Hellfire Club", then The Private Matter, "Lord John and the Succubus", Brotherhood of the Blade, and "Lord John and the Haunted Soldier." Diana is working on a new Lord John book, Lord John and the Scottish Prisoner.

~~The most wonderful thing about Diana Gabaldon is her generosity. She is an important part of the CompuServe Books and Writers Forum where she offers advice and craft lessons for all writers. I highly recommend joining the forum to learn more about writing from Diana and the many writers who regularly post there.

~~Another example of Diana's generosity is the time she spends with her fans at book signings and festivals. I had the great pleasure to hear her and have some books signed at this year's Decatur Book Festival on September 5. After sharing insight into Echo and her upcoming graphic novel set in the Outlander storyline, she signed books for the hundreds of fans. Then went to another event and did it all again. The photo is of Diana signing books for me at Decatur.